Okay, okay, let me try and NOT flail all over everything because that has become, kinda, my default reaction to this fic because I just love it so much.
I love your Pepper because she's smart, and capable, and still adores Tony a whole lot even if she wants to kill him sometimes. Your Pepper voice is one of my favorite things, but you know this. I also *adore* your Rhody voice. He's just tone perfect and has THE best lines. He's just fantastic.
(Do I even need to tell you how much I love your Steve and Tony voices? No? Good.)
I love all the little food related touches and all the nice little details about the diner from the chairs to the layout. It just makes the whole thing feel really grounded.
and there are just so many little lines that I love and so many little details that just leave me cluthching my face in glee *G* Seriously. Like this: ""Eye in the sky. Got it, Cap. So who's the third wheel? Not the kid with the arachnid problem, please. He's gotta hit puberty before he can take out bad guys."
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Date: 2012-03-19 12:51 am (UTC)I love your Pepper because she's smart, and capable, and still adores Tony a whole lot even if she wants to kill him sometimes. Your Pepper voice is one of my favorite things, but you know this. I also *adore* your Rhody voice. He's just tone perfect and has THE best lines. He's just fantastic.
(Do I even need to tell you how much I love your Steve and Tony voices? No? Good.)
I love all the little food related touches and all the nice little details about the diner from the chairs to the layout. It just makes the whole thing feel really grounded.
and there are just so many little lines that I love and so many little details that just leave me cluthching my face in glee *G* Seriously. Like this: ""Eye in the sky. Got it, Cap. So who's the third wheel? Not the kid with the arachnid problem, please. He's gotta hit puberty before he can take out bad guys."
Also? your dialogue is *sparkling*!